Better late than never, but these went through a lot of revisions:
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I’m also going to take a chance here and do the project using the Xtranormal desktop. It’s kind of outside the bounds, but it’s an interesting tool, almost like CG storyboarding. I think it’s worth finding out how it will work for this.
And on another note, I’m doing this while listening to Merrie Amsterburg’s album Season of Rain. Good finals music.